The stlye is unique, you have great animation, and a suprising use of grim on the characters.
The only problem I have with this is that their is no direction. What was the point of the animation? I understand that you don't know what to have done with the idea, and I can relate to having an idea and putting it into flash.
But you can still do something with this series, maybe not now, but in the future it's still possible. And if you do something in this universe, some grand adventure of sorts, what are we to make of this flash?
I still think you did a good job though.